well. the story is about this fat girl, who (metaphorically) had a dream to be a superstar. She tried to go on a super diet, exercised vigorously, and in the end, succeeded in becoming a star. She held a concert at the Singapore Indoor Stadium and it was full housed.

Eventually... she realised. it was all but a dream. T_T

actually i thought the storyline was quite clear. But people pointed out that the transition from the 50kg to the concert scene was not clear. suggestions was that i should take away the concert parts entirely, and lengthen the losing-weight scenes. But the problem is that i like the concert scene alot. maybe... i can add a picture of her being inspired by singers? or holding a microphone? hmm...

dilemma dilemma dilemma..